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mopey Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 12 |
you were there when i laughed and there when i cried you were there when i gave up and when i almost died you were there when i was good and when i was being bad you are the best friend i know and have ever had and now you ve gone and left me you're on to better things and now as i look back all i feel are stings i know i made mistakes you must have made some too but because of one mistake i made i no longer have you you were there when i was hurt and there when i was stronger but the chance to be there again you will get no longer |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
this poem is really sad. i know how it feels to loose a good friend, but you expressed your feelings very well. i hope everything works out for you. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Friendship is a great treasure, and it's extremely painful to lose. You should treasure the memories of what you had together, and maybe you will be friends again someday. Best of luck! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This poem is soooo sad. Its horrible losing a friend I'm so sorry that you guys drifted apart...this person was obviously EXTREMELY important to you. "Its the most amazing thing when two strangers become the best of friends, but its one of the saddest things when the best of friends become two strangers" Dont you agree? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I know what it's like to have loved and lost... in the terms of friendships, and it's really hard. I'm sorry things worked out this way, but there is a great possibility you two may be able to reform your bond. Good luck...  xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I know exactly how you feel, to lose one of your best friends and you would do anything to have them back. It's a horrible feeling and I'm sorry you have to go through it because no one should have to. Keep smiling and just try to make the best of everything, and remember all your memories because they'll last forever even if your friendship doesnt. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this work speaks a lot to me because i have been in this situation before(in fact, dont we all?)....it really hurts when "shared experiences no longer remain relevant" to the other person,huh.... Wonderfully expressed and hugs to you...hopefully, soon rather than later, things will get better |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Actually, in the past week I experienced this exact thing...argh it bites. But I have a few more good friends to turn to, and I hope you've been blessed with some too...Great job on the poem and getting those words out. ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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mopey Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 12 |
Thank you all for replying, um, i kkow this is going to sound dimb, but does anyone know how to get that signature thingy after your name you know the tiny message you can put after your poem. i was just wondering. |
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mopey Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 12 |
Thank you all for replying, um, i kkow this is going to sound dumb, but does anyone know how to get that signature thingy after your name you know the tiny message you can put after your poem. i was just wondering. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
First of all, great poem! It really expresses the sadness of losing a friend. Now, about the signiture (If no one's told you yet): Go to Member's Area at the top of the page, then click on Change your profile. There is a space in there to type in a signature. Hope that helps "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem!!!!! And find that thing on signature, those things really show what a person likes. I mean just read mine! yep yep hehe  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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