Teen Poetry #3 |
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live and learn |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
People learn what they live and theres no way around it we get ourselves into situations and we find ourselves surrounded, surrounded because we'll never know what life is all about we are too trapped in each other to ever find that out and it comes to a point were we just can't take no more we want to put the past behind and close all open doors because the doors lead to hallways of ignorance and heartache, and the hallways lead to stairways with each step a heart breaks so just because you've lived it doesn't mean things can't change if you learn from the mistakes it will help heal the pain and dont make exuses-it will only help the fire burn yes people learn what they live but it only counts... when you live what you learn I would like to thank everyone that welcomed me here, I have a feeling I will like it very much! |
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm glad that you like it so much here! It is a great place, and I hope to see you around a lot. This is a really good poem. The path of life can be painful and confusing, but it's all an learning experience. You describe it well. Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
yes people learn what they live but it only counts... when you live what you learn This was great. Very true... good words to live by. thanks for the read IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
IsGona already quoted the part I liked the most, the ending, it's so great! I'm glad you're liking it here, it's such a great place. Nice job on the poem ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow this is great!! If I haven't welcomed you already(I haven't been here in a while) then WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I like the way this flows, like a story ya know..keep it up Bel |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was great.......the title says it all! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
You got the message across with little words...Thanks for sharing it...I hope that you post more of your work here!!! P.S.~Welcome to passions!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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