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~SwEEt_LiL_GirL~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 21 |
Well i'll try again i don't know if this is a real good poem i just did it when i was in class, ha ha now you can see how boring my classes are! anyway i hope you everyone likes it. ~*~ Poem ~*~ The day has come for when I had to say "Goodbye" Not knowing what to say, Not knowing what to do, Just wishing that this day wouldn't have to come so fast. Seeing you standing there, Smiling, Trying not to show a single tear, trying to be tuff, but on my half, I showed you my saddness inside, didn't i? Why didn't you? Whipping the tears from my face and giving you one last hug. Then turning my back and walking away, knowing I wont see you until God wants us to. Its been half a year since I have seen you From seeing each other for the past eleven years And not seeing each other any more Still hurts. But I'll always keep you im my heart and that's were i'll keep you forever. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good poem!!!I know what you are going through...I lost my best friend for a short time but it felt like forever...Its good that you still have a place in your heart for this person though...Keep up the good work!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very good job of expressing this, I think the poem is great! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job in expressing your feelings about such a topic. A much appreciated read!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Fr apoem written in such a small amount of time, i'm am very impressed. You shown you emotions in your own great way. thanks for sharing. keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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