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tq_99
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since 2000-11-14

Posts 45
Las Vegas, NM, US

0 posted 2000-11-19 05:15 PM

I wrote this poem in reflection with a situation that I am going through right now, and that I would ask your prayers for:

I'm Sorry

I'm sorry I never gave you a chance
I'm I never knew
I'm sorry for never sharing a glance
I'm sorry I didn't have those feelings too

I'm sorry that I don't know what else to say
  I'm sorry I don't know how to make you stay
I'm sorry I just can't find a way
  I'm sorry for the wrongs I do, I'm sorry for not noticing you

I'm sorry for having to ask for a second chance, and for being in my own little trance

I'm sorry I can't promise you everything
  I'm sorry I can't give you a beautiful ring

I'm sorry that you don't know how much I care for you, and I'm sorry I don't know if you care for me too.  I'M SORRY

"Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing"

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2000-11-19 08:59 PM

I really liked this good job on your expression.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2000-11-19 10:17 PM

Well your poem is very touching because it shows so much emotion. In a way I can relate to what the poem is saying because I'm sorry for a lot of the situations I've been in and still am in. Because it seems like in a lot of the situations I'm in right now are hurting my close friends. But all I can say is pray about it and no matter how hard it is know eventually it will get better.Keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

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3 posted 2000-11-19 11:24 PM

I can really feel the remorse and sadness in this piece. I hope things work out for you, and you definently have my prayers! God bless!

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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

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On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-11-20 05:22 PM

I think this poem gets your point across very well. I hope things work out for you in the end. Good job expressing your feelings in this poem

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Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-11-24 06:29 PM

I like the repetition in this one. I liked it a lot. Very good!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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tq_99
Junior Member

since 2000-11-14

Posts 45
Las Vegas, NM, US

6 posted 2000-11-24 06:44 PM

Thanks everybody, you have no idea how much your encouraging words mean to me right now. Thank you, and god bless you all.

- tq_99

"Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing"

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