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Morouxshi San
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0 posted 2000-11-19 12:17 PM


-=Avoid Dreams=-

she hates the thought
she hates the feeling
she hates to see me
everyday dreaming

she gets up
she tells me bout it
she makes it look
as if the world was drowning

she says
its not going to happen
that theres no chance
she always ends up screaming

she always hates
she always screams
what she doesnt get
im following them anyways

Note: this is a reconstructed poem, i kinda misplaced the original, ill post the original when i find it.
Re-Note: if you miss dope, hell be back soon, hes in New York...

"I let my thoughts known. Trust, I found, was overrated."
-San on his website


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

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1 posted 2000-11-19 10:26 AM


"Yes, I am a dreamer. For a dreamer is one who can find his way by moonlight, and see the dawn before the rest of the world." -Oscar Wilde

Sometimes, dreams are the only light we have in a dark world, and people who want us to give in to the darkness will try to get us to extinguish the light. I'm glad that you want to keep the light burning bright. Best of luck!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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2 posted 2000-11-19 04:09 PM


  
   Hey. Me likes. It has to do wit my fave topic, dreaming..sometimes I'm that girl who thinks dreams are bad, maybe cuz I rely on them so much. Anyways, great poem you got here. Ciao.

  ~Carly

A word is dead
When it is said
Some say,
I say it just
Begins to live
That day.

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-11-20 03:04 PM


Hey,
What do you have if you don't have dreams!?!  Reality.  Now that's scary   Ok, good job on this, I would like to see your original though, so make sure to post it! oh yeah, thanks for replying to my poem


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Morouxshi San
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4 posted 2000-11-24 12:49 PM


thanx for the replies...

lakewalker, i am looking for the original...
i really am...


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2000-11-25 04:03 AM


I'm BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!!

Anyway great poem san! I liked this a lot!!
The depth was great and i think the formatting of the poem rocked. I hope you find the original!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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