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Memories of you (dad) |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Come on Minna you can walk No I can't daddy it's to hard Minna you can do this come one Why don't you understand I'm weaker Okay lets get in your wheelchair 1 year later Daddy why can't you live Minna I can't anylonger I love you daddy You are a huge impact in my life You may have droven me crazy but that's what your supoesed to do. Your daddy's gone Minna WHAT?? no I want him back! We know but he's in a better place He always love you Now he's your angel He'll be encourging you everyday He'll never leave your soul Minna.. Dear daddy I have been trying my hardest to do everything that you told me but my body's getting weaker it's hard to believe and no one see's it Daddy I miss you Last night you were in my dreams You were smiling at me Hugging me We were at the mall bying chocolate as always You say lets go out to eat I say okay Daddy The dreams of you are awesome I know your watching me I love you daddy Happy Thanksgiving, and Marry Christmas Those are my memories of you.. Love Always and Forever ~*~Minna~*~ If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Minna ... this is such a sweet and tender tribute to your dad. He will be with you always ... in your heart, in your dreams, and in your memories. Take care, and hugs to you for this lovely and touching verse.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Minna, this is such a beautiful tribute to your father. I'm glad that you see that he is your guardian angel, and I hope that writing this helped you in some way. Thank you for sharing it with us. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Hi, Kit&Love.. When he was about to die, he said Minna you'll do fine. Don't give up in life because if you do I'll be very sad. I know he's watching me as I am learning how to walk even though it's the hardest thing I am doing.. ~*~Minna~*~ If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Have you ever seen many 15 year old boys cry because of the poem they just read? well ive never seen one untill now. i cryed when i read this poem thanks you for sharing and if ya ever need a friend even tho i dont know you, you can email me or im me on icq its your choice...........love Branden |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
That was such a touching poem it brought tears to my eyes which never happens. Keep up the awsome work it's very inspiring. Lauren |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Minna- Oh my...this is such a beautiful and loving tribute to your dad. I'm sure he is VERY proud of you and your positive attitude. Thanks so much for sharing this. hugs to you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Another great tribute to your father, it sounds like he had a huge influence in your life. The positive attitude shown in your words is so wonderful, keep posting your poems for us "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
thanks for all your replys they were really nice. i'm giving this one to my family on thanksgiving..christmas would be to hard for everyone. we are having a memorial thing in december i'm reading something in memory of my dad..i need to pick one out. so if you guys could help me that'd be a great help. or reply bye! minna email me or reply i meant have a nice day night what ever! [This message has been edited by ~*~PrettyGirly~*~ (edited 11-20-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey......this was a wonderful poem. I loved it. Keep it up!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You didn't only express your feelings so well in this one, you made the reader(in this case was me), feel almost exactly what you were feeling. My heart bleeds for you. Minna, hang in there....as you said in the poem too, though your body is not as strong, your dad is still obviously wants you to try. don't give up. you'll be in my prayers i love your poem I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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