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What i found in you (4 my bf) :)
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What i found in you (4 my bf) :) |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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What I’ve found in you… From the 1st time we talked I found kindness in you When I had my problems I found advice in you Whenever feeling down I found cheer in you When we got to know one another I found a friend in you And soon I found so much more Soon I discovered you were everything I wanted Then I discovered you were everything I needed You were care You were love You were concern You were there for me You are the one I’ve found in you everything * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is really good, it says so clearly how much you two must feel for each other. Awesome job expressing these feelings!  And I like your signiture "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this is so sweet...you've found incredible things in this person hun...very cute poem. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"I’ve found in you everything" This is a beautiful poem! You and your boyfriend are a great couple, and I know that you guys will be together for a long time. Keep up the great work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. Your devotion for this person is evident. Good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I feel the same way about my boyfriend. Sounds like you found a really good guy for yourself. Keep him!!! And keep up the good work!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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