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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
This is sort of another follow-up to the truth freedom series. Guess I never really thought of them as a series until just now as I was looking through my folder. Hmm...anyways, hope you all like it. Clear Skys The clouds have parted and the sun has finally shown through. Darkness have given in to light, sorrow to happiness. No longer do I see the flashes of lightning or feel the rumble of thunder. For the storm has ended, losts it's power and control. The clouds have parted and the sun has shown through...Clear skys have appeared. "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful.....glad to see that the rain showers have cleared up......hope you enjoy your sunny day.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well they had to clear up eventually, glad to hear that it happened  The poem is really good!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Thanx for the reply. Yeah, I'm glad that they cleared up too. Glad you liked it. Thanx again. "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
i am so happy to hear that the darkness has given way to light...it such a wonderful..fresh feelings. I hope it stays that way =o) |
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