Teen Poetry #3 |
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Depart From Me |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
Yes i realize that this poem is sort of long when you look at it like it is. but if you would flatten it out in a paragraph it's actually pretty short ![]() I hate that i wasted so much on you when there's so many more who care about me and how i feel and each day they ask me how it's been and i know they care from the tone in their voice as they speak of days gone by and times past through like the ones we went through that you no longer remember or care to share in reflection instead hide them inside and act like i never was a part of your life and your dreams you lived with every day and night you try to forget everything you know just as I couldn't wash you from my thoughts with the self righteous acts and insanity i let prevail in my life as a deterant from the inevitable realization that you cared not for me nor my life but your own selfish reguard and infamous carelessness you display to your family and friends when we see you lie to everyone including yourself does not know what you are doing behind that clouded sick head that you have developed a blind sickness and refuse to see reality which makes you less of a person and a horrible display for your children to come in the future you will still disreguard truth as an asset and will stumble over and over again because you refuse to open your ever blind eyes to the truth will set you free if you let go and allow Him to work in you and quit refusing help and shut your mouth and open your mind to see that you have errored and have become as the thing I hate that you have become what you are the appitomy of all that is dispised and all that is good to be with as the fire went out and i saw the deadness set in when i knew that you had fallen and would not let another pick you up from the thorns you are in and i will not reach my hand to help you up from there, not now and not in the days to come when all has passed away and you again speek of how it was back then I will stare at you in disreguard to your words and care not what you say nor will i ever again tolerate your lies so i refuse you thus i refuse to put from me the best i am! --Hoppy Swift as a shadow, short as any dream; Brief as the lightning in the collied night, That in a spleen unfolds both heaven and earth, And ere a ma |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Wow...talk about a good poem. This is a kind of poem that after reading it I feel like i can relate to you. Great poem man...reminds me of my ex. Lol. Keep on writing! niceguy "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is great..... a lot of power in this one. Good joB! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Long, yeah, but it was worth it, this is a very good read. You expressed yourself very well! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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