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a shallow heart...my sweat darling
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a shallow heart...my sweat darling |
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brendon2k Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 38none |
a once found happiness bright stars and joy i found in your eyes a new found hatred grows bleeding hearts and cold air can you see it in my eyes? another heart left broken another dream left unfulfilled one night spent thinking one night, a hate grows strong love? left with broken hearts bleeding wrists are now exposed hate? a knife placed in your heart tears of hope that cried now bleed red another night another night alone i swear another word and i'll end this all |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
whoa. This really moved me. What are you going through??? Maybe I can relate! Sorry if I'm going on the wrong track, but I'm trying! Much Love, Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow...these are very deep, strong and powerful words...that i think **good or bad** i can relate to...please e-mail me if you need someone to talk to at [email protected] because im always here for you to talk to...i think i know what your going through...it cant hurt just to listen..feel better hun.... |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
Deep..and very 'in your face' ..which I like in poetry.. Sad to say..it's a monotonous, never-ending cycle.. "..don't get sentimental It always..ends up drivel" - Let Down, Radiohead |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A wonderful poem. I like this poem a lot. Especially the title.......it intrigued me.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, you did a great job with this, the poem is really good! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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