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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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Why the river Quin does flow with endless miles of thundering rage, the answer she will never know but watches the current rush still more. Painting the rapids in her mind, every rock and fall there for all time, saving images for later inspiration to find, she saves the rage and wonders why. November 10, 2000 "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Lake you know I love your work and this is why i ask you "why the heck don't you post more often?" You would so brighten up the forum a lot if you would only post more. Anyway a great post!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
This is a GOOD poem...and I agree with Dopey...you should post more often because you a great writer. Hope to see more of your work. niceguy "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow, Lakewalker. I mean wow. I really loved it. And I wanna thank you for replying so often to everyone's poetry, it is really, really nice of you... I know I love it. So thank you, for being a good person and a very good poet.  ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
A powerful, well written piece Lakewalker! I enjoyed! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Lakewalker~ Hey, I really liked this!! Great job! Hope to see more posts from you soon... Take care, Sarah with the unknown comes no expectations in this i find my peace |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
man, i agree with dopey, i wanna read more of these, great ending too "saving images for later inspiration to find, she saves the rage and wonders why." jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Why don't I post more often? hmmmmmmm.....good question, maybe some day I'll think of a good response for you. But thank you for replying to this one everyone "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
I hate to sound like a broken record, but I agree with evry one here, you really should post more. And I also would like to thank you for replying to my poems, I really appreciate it...not to mention all the other replies I get, but anyway, Great and powerful poem, loved it. Barb "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Lake I'd like to give you props for your poem being picked for the Teen section of poetry within the Digital Passions newsletter. You're poem was great along with the other 2 poems picked out of the teen section. It proves, not only to us, but mainly to yourself that you can write wonderful poetry and inspire so many people. I am not sure how many people are on the receiving end of this newsletter, although I am part of staff, but I do know that a LOT of people will be reading your poem. Great job! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Wow! that was sooooo good. you really should post more, i'm sure anything you post will be good! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
The ending had a very powerful impact..it ended with a thought to remeber...i have always admired poets, writers who could leave me with one thought after I read their work...you r one of them... ~Ina~ |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Such a powerful picture you paint here, Lake! I also have to agree with the above replies in saying that I wish you would post more. You have great talent! Keep up the great work! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thank you all for the replies  Dopey, Congratulations to you too, I saw your poem was in the newsletter as well!! Maybe I might possibly have a chance to consider the thought of possibly posting another poem tomorrow, maybe. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Sorry if I'm a little late on this Lake....Well, I'm always late If you see old poems come back up, that's me replying to old poems  Hey, I do agree with Dopey though. This is really good. I mean, It's awesome. You should try to post more often. Thanks for shring this one. And share more next time I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Better late than never acire, thanks for reading my poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Lake - a good poem - they are all right you are good at what you do! I look forward to reading more soon!! Melz!! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Oh this one was great. The rhyme was very neat, and the way you worded the whole thing was delightful. ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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