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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
I am new here and I'm not a very good writer...I especially suck at endings but I thought I post this and see if anyone liked it. This is about some of the things I was feeling when I was contemplating getting into another relationship with a girl after breaking up with my ex 3 months ago. Hope ya like it! On paper I had this arranged nicely but when I typed it out it didn't quite go as I had planned. Sorry it's so disorganized. Uncertain I know these feelings inside you are hard to ignore. All your built in defences are telling you this won't work. Your heart yearns to be free...but is afraid of what may happen. There is something thats holding you back. You don't want this to end...but you don't want to hurt. Unsure if your heart can stand another break. For this to be you must decide...will you stay or will you go? |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This is awesome! That is something that eventually crosses your mind in a relationship, do i stay and not be happy or do i leave and break their heart. great way or expressing yourself  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a great job of telling your thoughts here! So, how did you mess up the typing? Good job on the poem, but I'd like to see how you'd arrange it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is great! I can see you're having a hard time with the women and well, i hope things turn out good. This was a good post......hope to see more of you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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