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I run from my fears :(
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I run from my fears :( |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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I Run From My Fears I run from my fears, Something everyone does, But today I try to face those fears, They bring nothing but tears, Tears that hurt like hell, It feels like someone rang the dark bell, I would usually run at the first sign of trouble, But you mean way to much to me. You have mad me complete, But everyday I want to run from those fears, The fears that ill be hurt,left,or not loved, Wouldnt you run to? I want to but I Love You, Your my one thing that finally made me complete, You've always been so sweet, But when we come accross problems I wanna run. Can I run from my fears? No,you wont let me, But are my fears supposed to be this way? Does this mean..... Yes it does...... It means....... Me and you Are meant to be. I finally find a way to conquer my fears and stand on top of them like im invisible. Now I know that You'll never Hurt me,Leave me,or Not Love me! This is dedicated to the hard times me and my gf lisa had a few days ago i wanted to run away and dump her but for the FIRST time in my life i faced my fears and it ended up saving me something i really loved. "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job branden......relationships are hard. You have to stick with them and compromise your wants. You have to just grit your teeth, put on a smile, and say damnit i love you and im not going to let this end! haha.....or something like that.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Thanks dopey, as always you give me great advice. I have dont that dopey and im so glad i mean its the first time i haven ran from a realationship!! "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think the poem was very well done, it really says a lot. Great job on the poem and way to stick with the relationship  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey lakewalker thanks for the reply and im bumping this back up to the top to see if i can get n e more reply's! "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Good work on this one. I hope you two will stay happy together, realationships are great if they can last! xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
branden- this is wonderful. it's great that you care so much about your girlfriend that you had the courage to face your fears and work things out with her. once you've faced them, it's easier each time after. great job of expressing these feelings...enjoyed it much. *smiles*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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