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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
I just ran across this poem again while looking through my journal.. it was written about a year ago and is getting published (thanks to poetry.com)! It was surprising news to say the least!  Anyways, hope ya'll enjoy it... --- I Can Never As I lay on the cold ground Screaming at the night I can't help but wonder Why wont you come back and fight? Not a war made of fists and blood But a battle of betrayal, pain, and dying love. Instead you leave me here to cry With the harsh rain soaking me through The lightening storm roars unforgiving Like the emotional flood I feel for you. You turned your back when I needed you most Now you are nothing but a thought, a memory, a ghost. I know I must get up and move on From this I will be stronger than ever But you left a deep scar on my soul And I can forgive you... never. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Wow that was really good and i can see why they would want to publish it. the imagery in it is so intense i can actually visualize that. great job! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think this poem is great. the ending is very strong. It has so much strenth that it left me stuck to my seat motionless.....hehe ok well no....but still it should have. great poem! congrats on the publishing!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey! Theres no doubt as to why they want to publish it..it rocks!! It has so much emotion and pain in it and you portray it so poetically...its amazing and congrats! |
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ZAOfreak Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 22CA, USA |
Right on! A sensational poem, worth publishing. I can feel its emotion... this is a living poem. I enjoyed it much. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this was very well done, it's really a great poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey, which book is it gonna be published in?? I'm gettin one done too. Yours is a bit more deserving, I loved this!! Great job. ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Thank you guys very much!! I'm glad you liked it Carly- I think the book is titled "Nature's Echoes", and it's suppose to be out 1/1/01... but i'm not absolutely sure. and Congrats on your too! I'd love to read it if you ever feel like posting it here Take care, Sarah (sorry if this gets posted twice!!) with the unknown comes no expectations in this i find my peace |
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