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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
*~I got really bored and just came up with this on my own...it's kind of funny~* I fell for his charm I thought it couldn't do any harm But it did And out popped a kid! ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Haha yea it was funny. I liked the popped out the kid part. I envisioned a kid LITERALLY popping out. oh well that's just me!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
That's pretty funny...i was laying bed one night and just thought of that! haha...sorry to anyone if u took it seriously. ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Hey that was pretty cute. it's good to see a poem that you don't have to take seriously. excellent  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hate to say it, but I thought the same same thing as Dopey, I saw the kid popping out  !"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Lol. It was cute, very cute. And with a bit of a lesson too! Super poem. ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
LoL *POP* I can see that!!! Cute poem If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
LOL this was cute...But this does happen thats the sad part about it... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Hey...this is a funny, but cool, poem. You should write more of these! niceguy "Don't take love for granted cause once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I actually thought it was kinda sad. It's hard for me to grasp the thought of kids having kids. I'm not trying to offend anyone, but that's my view about teenage pregnancies I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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