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those blue pills |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Then I wake up I realize I shouldn't have drank those beers and taken those pills my stomach ready to spill forth the both of them and I, I am nothing but what I pretend to be and even then I don't make sense to me I wish I did god, I wish I did for my words would have more meaning and depth and my heart wouldn't be so damn heavy and life wouldn't seem such a burden, but an experience as Kerr tells me it is why don't I listen? I'm too damn stubborn so damn stubborn and all the while he sits, and looks at me with those eyes god, those beautiful eyes with out saying a word tells me he loves me in the way he always does when I wake up in his bed and I, find myself believing him, and finding self-indulgence within the constraints of his arms for there is nowhere else I want or even care to be and then, I realize, it's only wishful thinking and I took too many damn pills *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I guess if you're looking for advice I don't know what to say, I'm awful at that. But, this poem felt so real, you did a great job writing it! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
All i know is that PILLS and ALCOHOL is crap. It won't solve your problems it'll just numb them for a bit. And what the? You pop out of your numbness and you're right back into the crap hole and with a huge headache and a buzz.......so stop if this is not about you.....then ok.....no prob wonderful poem though. just lookin out for the well being of a fellow human.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
My dear Jessica...It sounds like you are having a rough time in your life right now...I dont know what to say...You know that I am here for you if you ever need anything...Dont drink and mix pills...Something could happen to you...Its not good either...Just remember if you ever wanna talk you know the email address...Love Ya Jello!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Great poem, it felt so real. drugs and liquor are bad for you and they do nothing but bad. they numb you temporarily and when you wake up you have even more problems.  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Jess- you can't do this to yourself. Get some help and if your sad talk to someone. If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Jess, this is great, but again it's so *frickin* sad. It kills me that you're going through all this pain, becuase I know you're a good person. If you need someone to listen I'm here, ok?? Really though....just e-mail me. Alright, it's a good poem, nice job, keep your head up Bel |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
What are you doing? Do you remember what you promised me? OMG, this poem just reminds me of my ex. That's exactly what she did, and now she's gone. She took too many and she didn't even think of the consequences. She left a lot of people hurting, and I think that was selfish of her. Talk to me Jess, I'm not kidding. If not at least talk to someone. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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