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Screwed Over
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Screwed Over |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Screwed Over: A slow decay taking form. Clothing apparel worn out and torn. Withering on clouds of hell. Wishing that all was well. The blood shed life prances around. Tripping again, falling down. Getting up in hope of gain. Stabbed in back, I live in vain.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. You amaze me, you really do. I could feel the darkness...it's so cold. Maybe it will go away someday.... ~Carly |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I know what it feels like to stand up again, hoping for another chance, and then getting the opposite. But just remember...if you keep trying, you have to win eventually. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, This one says a lot, I think you did a great job on it! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I like this... I haven't read any poems from this site in a while... thus haven't read from you in a while.... which wave is this one from??  Good work.Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Jenn These are all from my current waves. The 6th Round is the name......i have more than 140 poems in this round which is quadroupled my average amount of inspiration. BTW.....glad you all liked and yes, very dark......im over it a bit but not completely ....oh well! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Great poem dopey! it had a lot of feeling to it, i loved it! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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