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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Sometimes you know me, sometimes you don't. Some things make sense, and some things don't. sometimes I wonder, sometimes I cry. Some thing's wrong now, and I don't know why. Some stuff makes sense, and other stuff is confusing. Some people are loveable, and some are abusing. Sometimes I see things, that aren't really there. Sometimes I wonder, if you ever did care. Some thing has changed, and it's more than I can take. Friendship is to sided, that's something I can't make. So please tell me, if it's hello or goodbye. And please don't leave me here, just to sit and wonder why. Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was great. I liked the poem very much. You have talent!!!! Much love!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Yankee10n20BFF Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 27T-Town, AL |
I agree with Dopey on this one. Great poem! Yankee No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
I agree with Yankee on this one.  Wooow, this was a really very incredibly great poem! I really loved it. You have the gift, and you use it very good. Thanks for sharing this excellent poem, and thanks for everything. Bye, your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Nicely written Allysa! I liked the flow in this, and enjoyed the many thoughts this brought to mind, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I love how this poem is set up, it's great. It doesn't sound like a very good situation, I hope you aren't left confused and questioning. But the poem is written very well "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks guys, ya all are so nice. You all are making me smile!!! I am glad ya all care, and that you think I'm talented!!! Love Ya all!!!Allysa Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey girlie, you still goign thru this. You should put an end to this. Sorry you have to go thru all this. Thanks for sharing this wonderfull poem. keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ohh Allysa I loved this one!!!Keep up the good work girl!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks ya all! I think I'm gonna TRY to talk to Justin. I think that's what I need to do because of how I feel. Well, thanks! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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