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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Sour Thoughts: Swine is swine Sin is sin Wine is wine Gin is gin Figure eight Frowning bright Can't think straight There's no light Death to all Sorrow time The fall of falls A sour lime "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmm..now come on a face like that is never sour ...  think happy thoughts... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I swear I've read this one before. I must have, I just remember it for some reason. hmmmm, that is weird. Anyway, nicely done. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
great poem dopey! it had something special to it, it made me want to read it again for some reason  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nakd- how sweet of you! You're always makin me smile. Lake maybe you're thinking of a poem I wrote called Sour lime. or at least i think i have a poem called sour lime.........uhhhhh.....wait no thats the last verse of THIS poem hahaha.....*thinks* hmmmmm....ok I have no idea. It's 2am.....im talkin out my butt. I don't want to say anything stupid now...hehe.. surely nothing about a river. hahahahahahahahaha.... ok sorry, im just never going to let you forget about that one lake! have a good one buddy!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Dopey, this is awesome!!!! There's not much else I can say. I love you!!!!!!!!!!!! Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, I'm talking to a river, at least i find it funny too "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hahaha I'm glad you're such a good sport about it though, lake. Shows character. Some people would have busted out on me with insults for having a good time with an honest mistake. Glad to see you're not like that bud! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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