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Life's Just the Same Ol' Jumble
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Life's Just the Same Ol' Jumble |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
Why did he have to take everything and leave? The meanings of my heart are deep within Which means I don’t wear my heart on my sleeve I feel like it’s been torn in two by the slice of a pin Lately everything reminds me of him Now all I want to do is forget the past year When he appears in my mind everything around me goes dim I can’t take it anymore, I HATE this fear My head is in a jumble I can’t concentrate on anything All I want is peace and to be humble But the people in my life never stay long enough to mean something (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." :: |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You thoughts are written so well in this one, I hope things can be better for you soon. Good job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I hope that one day things get better for you...I know what its like to have everything remind you of someone that you dont care to be reminded of... I love your quote too... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was a real sad poem. I hope all is well and wish you luck in the future.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
Thanks for your compassion, but this is an old. It was about my X  (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." :: |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a very depressing piece. People can hurt you more than they'll ever realize, and it's so hard to move on. I'm so glad that you have moved on. Keep up the great work! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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