»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
I want you (I want your love)
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
I want you (I want your love) |
|
|
JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
The lightness is laughter, A smile on your face, Your eyes are my hunger, No fruits can replace, Wanting and taking, Come be here with me, Take my hand, Be my everything. I want your love I want your kiss I want everything, everything, I want your heart I want your soul I want you, only you. The darkness is soothing, You're arms around my waist, Feeling your body, at slow steady pace, needing and giving, I want to be your whole life, pain in the past, that cut me like a knife. Dawn makes a silouette, Of the hurt and the pain, Hold me closer, We're happy again. ~JeNnYeMeShAn~ This poem is for my friend Chris who has become a lot closer to me in the past year. He doesn't quite know it but this is how I feel. Thankx for reading. I appreciate it. bye bye! "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Jennifer Trejo - All Rights Reserved | |||
Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great and i wish you the best of luck with your friend chris. GO GET 'EM COYWBOY!!!!!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
||
|
kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
this was a great poem..a good way to show your feelings for your friend chris...i hope everything works out for u... |
||
|
Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is a really good poem, thanks for sharing it with us!  Are you planning on letting chris know?"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
||
LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Come be here with me, Take my hand, Be my everything." This is such a sweet poem. It's wonderful to have someone who you feel so strongly about. You should share this with him, definently. Keep up the great work! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
||
|
curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This is such a strong poem. It's awesome! You should let him know how you feel. the worst thing that can happen is that you lose a friend, and you can alwasy make new friends. go for it girl! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
||
|
liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
This was a really good poem. I really enjoyed reading it. |
||
|
Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
great poem!! you express your affection for this person soo deeply, just make sure you let him no sometime dont wait!! good luck!Slim "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
||
|
Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
if i were your friend and you gave me this poem, I'd fall for ya right there on the spot. That is how sweet this poem is, so give it to him. Tell him how you feel. Better than wondering what could have been I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
||
|
silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
That's a really sweet poem! i loved it! GOOD LUCK WITH CHRIS!  |
||
|
JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
hey everyone, thanks for the replies! Thanks for the positive attitude! I've decided to give it to him and see how it goes. Even tho he lives 3 hours away I have a feeling we can keep it going. We made it almost a year chatting and talking. Thankx again and for the support. I'll keep you all updated on it! k? bye! -Jennye "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
