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a crying game |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
It's been awhile since I've written, so just bear with me I saw you one day I wanted you So I poured my heart onto you… yet you fell into the arms of another. seasons passed, You came running to me You saw me as I passed with another woman you ran haome you cried immediatly after, so did I. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jose~ The worst thing you could do is get caught...I am sorry if this happened to you...This was really good after not writing for awhile...I have to start again...I took too much time off..< !signature--> ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey that's pretty damn good jose!!!!! I liked it very very much. LIke you wanted her but she didnt want you.....then she did....but you had another woman....but you still wanted her......and you couldn't get with her because you had this other girl. VEry sad....but i liked it a lot.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This was really good, esp since you haven't written for a while. i'm sorry you got caught but i guess it's all a part of life. great poem!  Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Sometimes timing isn't so good, as Dopey pointed out. Great job on the poem, it's really good "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
thanx guys for liking this poem curly- u r right, it is a part of life erin- I need to see more of your poetry |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jose~ Right now I have no idea why I cant right a decent poem...But hopefully soon you will see a new one!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
another one of the ironies of life. Seems like we all go thru the same things. Great write my friend. keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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