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Nice guys barely finish
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Nice guys barely finish |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC 
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Have you ever heard the line "you're a really nice guy" If I'm so nice how come it's so easy to say good-bye You'd rather go back to that asshole As if life with me is too dull Would it keep you on the edge of your seat Wonderin' if you'll get beat Do you like the feeling when He decides to blow you off again You deserve to be treated like gold With you I could grow old With me you're treated like a queen How do you go back to someone who's so damn mean You know what he's doing behind your back I think it's about time you start to pack Have you noticed that the bad outweighs the good You need to do what any smart girl would I'm waiting here in love with you With open arms that long for you But I won't even get a second glance You'd rather take another chance And this nice guy will finish last After you have gone and had a blast You'll start thinking about the past And you'll come running real fast I may be happier in the end But it took so long to begin The stress, it drags me down The stress of you not being around In the end I'm what you wish But the truth is Nice guys barely finish  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Keoni~ Good one!!!I agree with you 100%...And I am a female...For some reason girls would rather have guys treat them really bad...Who knows why...I know I have a friend that is with a bad guy and wont leave him cuz she just had his 2nd kid...And its a shame that she stays with him after the way he treats her...You wrote an amazing poem and I give you props for it...Keep it up!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was great. Yes im one of those nice guys and it screws things up sometimes. But great way in portraying how we are and what happens. GOod job!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ohh and P.S. I am with one of the good guys that you are talking about...I would never put up with a guy that didnt treat me good, trust me he would get his if he didnt... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, good job on this one!! I like how you ended it:"But the truth is Nice guys barely finish" I think it's a really good poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
great poem! and it's so true because it seems that things work like that. i especially liked the way it ended. Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Considering the fact that it's your life and not mine I can't tell you what to do. I hope she comes back to you, but also why do you wanna be with someone who thinks you're not good enough? I don't understand. I hope things go in the direction you want it to. Stay on the high ground and take care of yourself. Great poem and I hope to read more asap! k? ~JeNnYeMeShAn~ "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
this is a great poem, I'm sorry, what can I say life's just not fair. Maybe you should stop trying to be so nice get out there and slit somebody's throat. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I agree with you 100 percent Bad guys --- BF material Good Guys --- best friends material that's crazy aint it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
very true poem. intresting how a lot of women are agreeing with it. and, yes, nobody wants to be dopeys girlfriend. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
 "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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apsara Member
since 2000-11-09
Posts 70 |
I guess its true whatever you've said. But hey, some girls do come to their senses in the end and isn't it better to finish and get something that you want rather than not getting it at all. I guess if she comes back to you, she'd appreciate what she's got and never let go. Cheer up, think positive. Love, apsara |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I understand exactly what you are saying. As a female, I can honestly tell you that I hate to be treated badly. I've had both. I've had the bad guy who flirts with my friends, and manipulates me beyond repair; the one who tries to "restrain me" so I'll be good.... And I've had the good one. The one who'd roll over shards of broken glass to get to me. The one who'd do nearly anything I ask of him, in a heartbeat. The truth is, we need someone in the middle. Someone to stand up for themselves, yet not be rude and harsh with us.. It may make no sense... but hey sometimes you boys confuse us as well. Good writing, and when your girl gets out of the "tough luv" cycle, maybe she'll come around.Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
AWWWWW Dopey.... ya know i luv ya If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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