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Rockhead01
Junior Member

since 2000-06-26

Posts 12
Maryland, USA

0 posted 2000-06-28 11:48 AM

Our Secret Place

If I could find a place
To leave this world behind
Somehwere in time and space
Where i could ease my mind
I would take oyu there
So we could be together

No one could find this place
The Secret would be ours
With no more pain to face
We live among the stars
In solitude we could wonder free
Alone, at last, just you and me

Our beautiful island universe
A world unto its own
Forgetting all the worst of times
In our place still unknown
As we are one to make a life of peace
And like eternity, our love will never cease

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2000-06-28 12:30 PM

Welcome to Passions!

This is a beautiful poem! It's filled with beautiful imagery and is obviously written with love. I hope you find this secret place.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Vball Chickie1624
Member

since 2000-05-14

Posts 116
New York

2 posted 2000-06-28 01:02 PM

Great poem. I love it. It would be nice if there really was a secret place. Keep writing!

Luv ya,
Danielle

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you

~Night_Mist~
Junior Member

since 2000-06-24

Posts 31
Calgary, AB Canada

3 posted 2000-06-28 03:29 PM

Hey:
   Great poem. I really like it. It's really sweet! Keep writing cause I wanna read more!
                Luv, ~Night_Mist~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-06-28 05:48 PM

well this is a really BEAUTIFUL poem...WELCOME to passions...i really hope that you like it here as much as i do... i wish that there was a place like that too...
having no one to bother you if you just wanted to get away...no one to find you...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-06-29 12:55 PM

there is a place like that but you kind of grow out of useing it. but when your a little kid it takes you there where you are what you want to be and everything else. i still think like a little kid a guess cause i live in my own reality. loved the read and hope to read more from you soon.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Misty Blue
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 44

6 posted 2000-06-29 07:18 PM

Hi
That was a very inspiring poem you should be extremely proud.You've got alot of talent keep it up and take care.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2007-11-19 08:08 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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