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My First Poem....
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My First Poem.... |
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Yankee10n20BFF Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 27T-Town, AL |
My Last Words to You I define a special friend, as someone who will always be there for you; no matter what goes on in your life, or what he** you are going through. God brought you to me for a special reason, to have a friend I can love and trust; and to have someone to care for me, whenever I feel as low as dust. You've been there for me through thick and thin, You've been my best friend through it all. I know when I'm feeling alone, I have my best friend to call. I just wanted to say thank you, for everything you have done; and that I will never forget you, even when my time here is gone. I don't know what I am going to do when you move away; I guess I'll have a good cry. I just wanted you to know that I love you, because these may be the last words before I die. No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
YAY I'm the 1st to reply!! WELCOME TO PASSIONS  !! This was well written, good meaning, but kinda sad. Nice job, and great first post, keep it up  Bel |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions........you will like it here in our home of words and more words. Anyway........good first post. A wonderful tribute to friendship. I liked it tons.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions Friendships are a great thing and your poem really says that. Good feelings you put into this poem!!! I hope to see more poems and some replies from you soon "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
You sure knwo how to make someone fill up with tears. Wow & Welcome! LOL!!! I am definitely e-mailing this to my best-friend who moved away for college 3 years agoe. Great poem! Keep up the good work :***stephani**:* "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." :: :) |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to passions!!!I hope that you enjoy it here just as much as I do...Good first post...I really hope your friend likes it...Keep up the good work!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Welcome to passions this was an awesome first post! i really liked it keep it up Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Moon_Hunter New Member
since 2000-09-04
Posts 7 |
Welcome to passions. Awesome poem. Definetly a strong ending. It is beautiful in a sorta cryptic way |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Welcome to passions~ hopefully you'll enjoy this forum like the rest of us. Nice first poem! I liked it. It must be really hard to watch a friend walk out of your life with reasons you can't control. If you keep in contact you will see each other again I wouldn't doubt it. If you meant so much to her she'll write back and love you back still and for more years to come. Same goes for you too. So keep your chin up hun! Take care! ~JeNnYeMeShAn~ "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Welcome to Passions!!! Very beautifully written piece for a best friend. Magnificent write and please do not hesitate to share more of your work. keep it up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
great first poem! liked it very much so... and i hope your friend saw this!! hope to see more from you Slim "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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