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Teen Poetry #3

Love's Lust

Rockhead01
Junior Member

since 2000-06-26

Posts 12
Maryland, USA

0 posted 2000-06-28 11:29 AM

Love's Lust

Through a desert of unsettled dust
I'm caught searching for love's lust
Then I found it in its purest form
Love incarnet, reborn

The climax of my dream
Was standing by a stream
Then I could clearly see
You were meant for me

And every time I look at you
Staring in your eyes, I know it's true
Everything else to me
Means little compared to you

~Night_Mist~
Junior Member

since 2000-06-24

Posts 31
Calgary, AB Canada

1 posted 2000-06-28 04:58 PM

Hello:
That was a very cute poem. I liked it! Keep writing.

Luv,
~Night_Mist~

Tara
Member

since 2000-02-21

Posts 76
Minnesota

2 posted 2000-06-29 12:24 PM

This was a really good poem. I printed it out and i'm gonna put it in my collection of favorite poems. keep up the good work and i hope to read more. Tara

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-29 01:20 AM

yes what a great poem enjoyed it much and i voted for it.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-19 08:07 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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