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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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YEAH RIGHT You said you would always be there when im hurt, Yeah right you were never there, You said you would never ever hurt me the way she did, Yeah right you hurt me worse, You said we would be together for eternity, Yeah right I dont even know why i belived, You most of all promised to love me forever and to never cheat! Yeah right not only 1 not 2 but 3 differnt ppl you cheated on me with, I was stupid to ever belive you, You told me I was the hottest guy around, Yeah right thats why your with HIM now huh, I thought I meant something to you, YEAH RIGHT! I loved you a lot and began to fall in love with you, I wish you wouldve felt the same way, Yeah right! Im glad I got rid of you now so it doesnt hurt worse farther down the road. Hey in the end I Still Love You YEAH RIGHT, IN YOUR DREAMS! Dont worry lol just another poem i came up with this morning before i went to school and its not from ne kind of personal experience cuz if it was i would be really heartbroken....wow i write good lol almost mad myself cry well hey there bye "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
wow. I like this. It kind of describes what I feel. Anyways, your signature, what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger??? Not entirely true. C-ya. Love ya, Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Well I dont know what to say...I know this wasnt a personal experience...But why would you want to write a poem like this???Or at least post it??? I wrote a poem called "An Unforgettable Friendship" about my best friend & I...How we wouldnt be friends any longer...We stopped talking, then we became friends again...But now things are changing to where I dont want to be her friend...I only said why would you post it cuz I like maybe jinxed myself... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoyed this poem of yours and I must say I am glad to find out that it wasn't a real experience. But if this should ever happen to you please remember, there are others out there who will someday treat you and love you the way you deserve...life is a game of trial and errors. For some it takes longer to find the right person that loves and to love back.  hope there is happiness in your future.~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem sucked YEAH RIGHT! OK, I know, corny, but I just had to type it Your thoughts are good in this, I liked it!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey there lakewalker, you scared the heck outta me there lol and for you erin i write what i want when i want i dont jinkx myself at all you see i write from mostly a 3 person view and like um im sorry if you dont like that write like this but hey if i didnt then what would u be reading? I just like to write and when something comes to me then i write it down okay? thanks for wondering cuz i probably cleared it up for a couple more ppl 2 "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
THIS POEM REALLY SUCKS!!!!! ok just thought i'd get a crack outta scarin you too....hehe......anyway no, it's good....yea right!...ok no....sorry it is hehe....anyway keep it up bud..........  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Thanks but no thanks plz stop scaring me  lol no im just playing dopey thanks for the reply "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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