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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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sitting around thinking about all sorts of stuff missing lunch hour, not really caring anymore looking at your letters wondering when I'll see you again missing you,hating you leaves are falling, kids are screaming but everything seems to dissolve the faces, the noise,the pain looking through a book of my feelings,trying to choose the one that best fits, not wanting them all locked up anymore wanting your hands to pull them away from me It's to hard to handle this by myself,so i'll put away my pride,if you put away yours because the pain although unbearable,will soon fade away, throwing away the note not even caring about signing it because i know life will go on because u will be here for me forever... ~Ina~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, this is good, I like it!  I really like this part for some reason:"looking through a book of my feelings,trying to choose the one that best fits, not wanting them all locked up anymore" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this wat great. keep it up ina!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I like this a lot, but one thing confusses me. If he is gonna be there for you and is there for you, why are you hurting? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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