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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
My heart controls my mind My mind is looking for answers it will not find My eyes can see As it watches my hands give you the key My lips sing As my earings swing My legs dance And in your arms we make romance From my eye comes a tear Cause i know when i'm with you i have no fear There's somthing inside me that says this is right My heart has reached it's highest height I know what to do So in your ear i whisper, I love you< !signature--> ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ [This message has been edited by Nikkisweet (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh wow this is good. It's so romantic: "I know what to do So in your ear i whisper, I love you" I love it  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great, a very romantic poem. I liked it a lot.!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Very nice, I'm liking this a lot. "From my eye comes a tear Cause i know when i'm with you i have no fear" I'm glad you are happy. Keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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