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Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31

Posts 228

0 posted 2000-10-30 12:36 PM

Lately there's been something going on between you and me,
As I imagine you see.
We've been together awhile now,
And it's time that I voice how I feel, somehow.

See, this love thing isn't easy,
And it's not a place I really want to be.
I've fallen for you and told you so,
But deep within my heart I'm hearing no.

You don't know what love is,
I'm sure that in your mind it couldn't possibly be this.
I try to pull away.
To say goodbye, as some would say.

I can't do that,
So here I stand, as frightened and as jumpy as a black cat.
Should I run, should I stay?
Would you care either way?

"I'll be your crying shoulder, I'll be the greatest fan of your life."
"You don't love her because she's beautiful. She's beautiful because you love

Slim
Junior Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 49
Kentucky, USA

1 posted 2000-10-30 05:04 PM

I luved this poem.. i can relate to it very much so.

"i've fallen for you and told you so,
but deep within my heart im hearing no."

these lines were my favorite. i think you express your feelings to this person very clear in your writing. it's good to finally let people know how you really feel. nicely done!

"just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible"

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

2 posted 2000-10-30 05:15 PM

I love this poem its kinda weird cuz usually you see ppl writing about being dumped not wanting to dump.....its weird but good!

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

3 posted 2000-10-30 05:42 PM

Well.....don't know what to tell you there. I assume you didn't show it to the person.....? Um....don't know don't know, great poem good luck
Bel

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-10-30 08:45 PM

This was great!!! I really liked this but..... i dont know......should you run? I'm not so sure.....cuz it all boils down to how you feel.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-10-30 08:47 PM

Yeah, it is all about how you feel. Maybe you should let them know that something doesn't feel right and see if things can be worked out. i don't know, don't listen to me, I always get the advice part all wrong

This was a very well expressed poem, good job on it!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2000-10-31 10:28 PM

I agree with lakewalker. Talk to him about it, see what both of you can do about it. He might be more understanding than you think. At least give him a chance. Good work and keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2000-11-01 06:48 PM

I'm shur that he would care if you left. I think that you really need to talk to him about how you feel, but if you feel like your left with the choice of running away or staying...do whatever you think is best for you. Great poem...keep em coming.

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