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TrueLUV
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0 posted 2000-10-29 11:00 PM


People say that nothing in life is free, but I thought that love would be.

I was wrong to think it was, and now I am paying the price of love.

I ask her to tell me whether or not I cried when she cried, laughed when she laughed, danced when she danced?

The only words that she could say was move on the moment is gone!

So I turned away wondering if she would remeber that I owed her $250 dollars  


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1 posted 2000-10-30 08:16 PM



  Hey. Thanks for postin this, I needed to smile.. heh..great job.

  ~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.


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2 posted 2000-10-30 08:32 PM


This was witty man. I loved this a lot. It was great hahahahaha made me smile tons. Good job! I liked this bunches.



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-10-31 02:04 PM


I like this, nicely done

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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4 posted 2000-10-31 10:52 PM


The first line made me think, oh another serious love poem. And I actually love the first line.  Then i read the last line.   Great work here.

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Erin
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5 posted 2000-11-01 08:02 AM


LOL I liked this one!!!Brought a really big smile to my face...Just hope she doesnt remember in the future!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Erin
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6 posted 2000-11-01 08:03 AM


sorry about this!!!~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~



[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 11-01-2000).]

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