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Teen Poetry #3

Something to smile about

TrueLUV
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-10-29 11:00 PM

People say that nothing in life is free, but I thought that love would be.

I was wrong to think it was, and now I am paying the price of love.

I ask her to tell me whether or not I cried when she cried, laughed when she laughed, danced when she danced?

The only words that she could say was move on the moment is gone!

So I turned away wondering if she would remeber that I owed her $250 dollars

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

1 posted 2000-10-30 08:16 PM

Hey. Thanks for postin this, I needed to smile.. heh..great job.

~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-10-30 08:32 PM

This was witty man. I loved this a lot. It was great hahahahaha made me smile tons. Good job! I liked this bunches.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-31 02:04 PM

I like this, nicely done

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2000-10-31 10:52 PM

The first line made me think, oh another serious love poem. And I actually love the first line. Then i read the last line.

Great work here.

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-11-01 08:02 AM

LOL I liked this one!!!Brought a really big smile to my face...Just hope she doesnt remember in the future!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

6 posted 2000-11-01 08:03 AM

sorry about this!!!~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 11-01-2000).]

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