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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
If I could fly I would never cry I could go anywhere And live my life without a care There would always be a smile on my face And I would wear a pretty white dress with lace I'd bring the love of my life with me So he could see all the beautiful things I see (unfinished) ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was great, good luck in finishing it. I'm sure it will continue to be an excellent piece of work. ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is SO CUTE!! nad nice quote on your signature!! i am going to add that to my giant collection! let me know when you get this done it will be awesome i am sure!!! ~*Pixie*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a great start and i hope to see the finished result of it all.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
As the others said, this is a great start and I really want to see the end product. So get writing!  Ok ok, I don't want to rush you, but please do post the rest of the poem when you're done "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
me too. keep us posted on this one I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Wow Nikki!!!So far so good...I cant wait to see the finishing of the poem!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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