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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Tell Me Here I go again Let the tears start For what you told me today Tore my heart I will not tell you to go I will not tell you to stay I made a deal with you It will not go away Tell me this won't tear us apart Tell me I won't regret my trust Tell me I won't have a broken heart Tell me this is love not lust I want the best for you But I don't want to hurt I want this to be true But I don't want to cry I want this to last Prove everything wrong Like we used to in the past I'm not asking you to go I'm not asking you to stay I'm not asking you to give it up Just maybe explain today Don't tell me yes Don't tell me no Don't promise me something Until you really know But do tell me And tell me now Tell me if it'll work If it'll work out for us somehow -Dedicated to someone, You know who You are.....answer me please- |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
it'll work out, as long as we keep believing and loving itll work out. i dont want to go but id be giving up a lifetime if i didnt. but we can make it work, ill be around. atleast all summer if nothing else, and hey, i might not even go, i havent talked to my dad yet. if i do go, we'll always stay with each other, ill never truly leave you unless you want me to...i never want to leave you i love you |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well.....Isabel was tryin to keep that "person" under cover with a little dedication thingy sayin..."dedicated to someone, you know who you arE".......basically tryin to keep this person down under ground....but hey.... now we all know who it's about! HURA!!!!! Sad poem and i hope things work out for the both of you. GOOD LUCK!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"I want the best for you" It seems this is more than lust, if it wasn't you would not be able to say that. I hope everything works out how you want it to, and very good poem!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
This was written really, really well. Whatever happens to you two is for the best, remember that. I wish you the best of luck... ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey this was great, good luck and im sure things will work out, they always do whether it be for the better or worse. keep posting **DQ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Its all about a lil TLC something we have sometimes to much or sometimes not enought well hey great poem......... *~Branden~* "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
DANG girl that was good.... but ummm you've got some splainin to do missy! where is he going? your email plus "his" little reply almost made me cry geeeez! Me "I feel fine enough I guess considering everything's a mess" Barenaked Ladies |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
i loved this poem.. it reminds me so much of my own personal past experiences. believe that eveything will work out for the better, and it will. good luck!! i hope it eventually works out between you two! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow, thank you all so much for replying!! I was crying when I wrote this, and at that point I didn't care how it sounded, as long as it got my point across, which I think it did. Let's see, the specifics: CLB- No, I don't want you to "truely leave" me. I hope you're right hun, I love you too  Dopey- Congrats, you made me smile for the first time this morning. Thanks, I needed it.  Lakewalker- Thanks so much, I hope(d) it was more than just lust. Child of the Stars- I try to remeber that, thanks. DancinQueen- Thanks, I'll keep posting  . Braden- TLC huh? I'll have to remember that Curlz- Did I do enough splainin? Aww cry for me? Don't cry for ME! *cough cough choke choke* Slim- Thank you much, I hope it does too. Thank you ALL SO much for replying, it means so much, hasta luego Bel  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Isabel~ I dont know why but I can actually paint a picture in my of how you are feeling...A horrible thing is when someone you love has to leave...My boyfriend left for vacation for 2 weeks...It was the worst time in my life...I for once had no one there for me...I am having some tough times right now and I had no one to turn to, to talk...I wish you and him the best of luck!!! I hope it turns out the way that yous want it too... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This poem reminds me so much of a song that goes: "Tell me you love me Show me that you care Hold me for ever Be the one to share..." Very good job on this my friend..i love it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
This poem is so GREAT! i love it and i hope it works out for you two!!! GOOD LUCK! and keep writing i enjoy your work!~*Pixie*~ |
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