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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
It's almost that time when GOD took you He wanted you for some reason I wanted you back but your happy and safe I guess where ever you are your happy. I think of you always and cry I have tears coming down my eyes When I look at pictures The family doesn't want December to come But we cannot stop it We all miss you because you were great. Even though the doctors try finding a cure They haven't yet and never will It's too hard for them. Love Always ~Min~ RIP Mikko Talviharju 2-21-43 to 12-23-99 "If you fail don't give up, if you fail again and do give up what will this life be" Mikko Talviharju |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
Sorry I hit Subit Topic and it went twice you may close one or both and I'm sorry. ~CPAD~  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
(No problem ... I zapped the duplicate for you.) I'm so sorry for your loss Min. This is a lovely remembrance to your father, and you will be in my thoughts and prayers during this difficult time. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
This made me cry..I can't imagine it...and I can't help...so all I can do is cry for you and pray for you... ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"But we cannot stop it We all miss you because you were great." These are such great words, you wrote this really well. Nice job on this poem, and I hope you make it through the tough times alright. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I loved the quote at the end, very nice. This whole poem was great. I loved it.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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