I wrote these yesterday (love problems)

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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-10-25 04:52 PM

~*~Mistaken Actions~*~

You thought I cheated on you,
But you’re the one that left me
For just another girl
That broke your heart
Lemme tell you
That just ain’t true
Yes, I admit
That I liked him,
But I never took
It past that point
I felt horrible
For even liking him
So what made you think
That I could possibly
Cheat on you with him?
Even when I was yours
He had ahold of my heart
He didn’t know it
And neither did anyone else

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~*~The Letter~*~

Another girl likes you,
But you’re with me.

You gave me that letter,
Written with you in mind.

With all we’ve been through,
I no longer question your love.

I believe that if you didn’t love me,
You wouldn’t have shown me.

Today she saw us together,
She must have seen love.

Cause she looked,
So terribly pissed.

For I’ve found someone to love,
That I refuse to stop fighting for.

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2000-10-25 07:00 PM

These are very good. I especially like the end of the second poem
"For I’ve found someone to love,
That I refuse to stop fighting for."
Very Cool
Keoni

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-10-25 07:51 PM

GReat poems........the first one was....well....nerve wrecking for me. I am kind of an obsessive compulsive freak when it comes to love. I believe a person should only have eyes for ONE person when they are in love. I'm so messed up for that and i demand so much out of love...i demand the perfectio definition of love. How horrible eh? Anyway......the poems were great and the second one was even better than the first.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-10-26 01:30 AM

I agree with Dopey...If you are with someone and supposedly love them you wouldnt go looking for other guys...I mean why would you stay with someone as you are out looking for other guys...Would you like a guy to go looking for another girl while he is with you???

Good poems though...As always!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

4 posted 2000-10-26 09:01 PM

These are great!! I can feel the pain in the first one. I hope things work out for you, good luck

! Keep writing
Bel

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-10-27 05:38 PM

I think these are good poems. I think I liek the first one more, but they're both really good. Nicely done on these

"I felt horrible
For even liking him"

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

6 posted 2000-10-28 01:57 PM

Hey. These were great, I liked the second one better myself. Well keep that head up and smile!!!!!

~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.

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