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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Temporarily Dead: It can never be. My emotions torn. A tear drop sea. Sorrow is born. Cross road time. Black blood stream. Satans gobblet of wine. Fallen angel wing. It can never be. Consume my bread. The hell I see. For now I'm dead.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was great, sent chills up my spine...woooOOOoo... ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Oooh, nice. Is it just me or are a lot of people writing on this subject lately. Okay so it's probably just me. Very nice Bel |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is kind of saddening (is that how you spell, it???, oh well...) for me to read. nicely done on it though  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
for some reason, this line get to me: "Consume my bread." Is it used cause bread has always been a symbolism of life? I like this one too I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well yea it can be viewed as a symbol of life and it's kick butt that you got that. It's also a religious thing doing with Jesus. Know how he gave all this bread to people and so on? Well yea.....that's basically what it means. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
'Satans gobblet of wine. Fallen angel wing.' profound...especially those two lines. "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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