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DragonFang
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0 posted 2000-09-24 09:45 PM


I stalk the halls
To begin the day
And found to my surprise
The warm embraces
Of His scythe

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

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Child of the Stars
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1 posted 2000-10-28 02:59 PM



  Hey there, this was really incredible. SO few lines, but such meaning...wow...great job...

  ~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.


Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-10-28 09:07 PM


Yeah, this was very good, thanks for sharing it

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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3 posted 2000-10-28 11:47 PM


Yea the ending was kinda like....woah. So you're being embraced by death......ew..bad thought.



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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