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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I stalk the halls To begin the day And found to my surprise The warm embraces Of His scythe "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there, this was really incredible. SO few lines, but such meaning...wow...great job... ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, this was very good, thanks for sharing it  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea the ending was kinda like....woah. So you're being embraced by death......ew..bad thought.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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