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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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You burn me, you sting.... Can I survive anymore? Can't seem to handle this thing. All of what we had, presently a chore. I gave it up, then want it back. I'm so worn out, will this ever stop? This always happens, guess I got the knack. I try so hard to comprehend, till I nearly drop. I always proclaim, there will be no more. This time was the last, This settles the score. Began so quickly, can't end just as fast? Love me and leave me, Kicked out the door. Fight me, deceive me... Can't try anymore. "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this was very negative, keep that head up Jenn. Never give up on anything you love, thats my motto.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. THis was really good.. Dopey's right... stay strong, kay?? And smile. It helps. ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Giving up is the easy thing to do, and believe me, i wish i didnt get fed-up so much and do the same thing. If you really love this guy and you believe that he's worth all your time and effort, then go for it. You never know what you had until its gone....Great poem! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It's much easier to give up, that's why not quiting means so much more. To me this poem gave me the feeling that you are very frustrated. I liked this poem, it's well done. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good format Jenn!!!I love the rhyming...Giving up is the easy way out and that only teaches you to give up when it gets tough...Fight through it and know that you are willing to try to be it... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, this was good, but so negative  . I'm sorry you have to go through with something like this. Anyway, keep your head up, stay strong, and SMILE! Hasta luegoBel |
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