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Black Widow |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Black Widow: The black widow spins again Among her webs of love. I grin, then smile. She's my friend. The souls bright shining glove. Her octa-leap pure of heart Has caused my mind a drift. The web of time comes apart, And axis of placement shift. The black widow becomes as one With the past perfect sense of life. Sorrow and pitty in eternal shun. She continues her way of strife. Future unknown, past all lost. Living for now, and today. Completely avoiding insidious frost, And kissing the nights away.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Okay this one made a LITTLE more sense, but I'm still in awe at it... too intense for my growing mind...hehe...stay cool man. ~Carly The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned. ~Isaiah 9:1-2 |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
very good poem, i know i said i wouldnt reply till dope gave me back my cd, but this one was good... San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is great Javier! you once again have created a masterpeice  hahaha hope you feel better!~*Justine*~ |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
*still woundering what exactically black widow is* but hey...i like mysteries hehe just cant figure em out for the life of me, but i love the deepness of the expressions, very....thought provoking? yea i guess that works let tie fighting words lie let the candle light die let the sun come up let the same inply ~EvE 6 |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like your expression. It seems I always say that in my replies to you though, but I truely mean it. Your poetry always make me think, which sometimes I like and sometimes I don't (if i get it I like it, if not, well, what do you expect ) Anyway, nicely done with this poem."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Vreni |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
This is Bea-uuuu-tiful! *L* I LOVE it! Your work is always so deep! You have an amazing talent |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
OK well basically......thanks for all the replies.......means a lot to me. You're all cooliez in my book. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Dopey: oh wow. im in awe. it took me a second to comprehend this, for i have an extremely large headach at the moment. All I can say is, I love you man!!!! Allysa Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
All I can say is whoa far out man!!!. early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. Poems are F.U.B.U ( for us by us.)----ME |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
It's really good, I like the title...don't know why. Do I say the same thing ALL THE TIME? Feels like it, alright, hasta luego Bel |
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