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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-10-23 03:47 PM


Well, Justin and I are doing great...as you can tell  

~*~ A Vow ~*~

Last night, I made a vow to you
A vow, like a promise
Is something that should be kept
I meant every word
That I spoke to you
I don’t know why
I just let the tears flow
Id never made a vow
Such as that before
I vowed to love you forever
I’ll do just that
Now a smile warms me
The thought of forever
Rings in my mind
From above, He shall
Watch our lives together.

~*~ Tamma M. Offenstein ~*~



If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



© Copyright 2000 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
branden726
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1 posted 2000-10-23 03:59 PM


Hey good poem i dont know why no one has reply'd to it but hey i love it and it tells your commitment to this guy and i wish my g/f would let me know if she was willing for a commitment or not cuz u can never really tell well hey good poem i like it

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

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2 posted 2000-10-23 04:20 PM


Yeah, it does sound like you're very comitted to him, I like the poem!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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3 posted 2000-10-23 06:42 PM


Well this was sweet as hell. Good to know some people like the idea of comittment at our age and i'm not the only one.



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Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2000-10-23 07:15 PM


What a lovely statement of your committment to each other Tamma ... nicely expressed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 10-23-2000).]

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5 posted 2000-10-23 07:20 PM


Hey tamma! I think its great that everything is going great with justin. Excellent poem!
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6 posted 2000-10-23 07:51 PM



  Hey. This was sooo sweet, very well stated too. I'm glad that it's all good... well happy writing and stay cool..

  ~Carly

The grinstone of life can either wear us down or change us, depending on what we're made of.

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7 posted 2000-10-23 09:10 PM


very sweet and gentle, great expression of love  

jeremy r


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Caz
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8 posted 2000-10-23 09:24 PM


I'm so so happy that everything is great in your life.
Monica and Justin are with you now, and all of us  
Your friend,
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

Tamma
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9 posted 2000-10-25 03:40 PM


Thank you all for replying, and as i go thru and re-read this, i realised that yea, even tho it took alot of breakups, but ive found a good guy...i just hope we both follow thru with our vows  



If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



Isabel Galaxia
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10 posted 2000-10-26 08:39 PM


It's incredibly sweet.  All I can say is I really really hope this works out well for the both of you!  Good luck, I hope you've found a good one, keep it up.  Hasta luego
Bel

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