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A Vow
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A Vow |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Well, Justin and I are doing great...as you can tell  ~*~ A Vow ~*~ Last night, I made a vow to you A vow, like a promise Is something that should be kept I meant every word That I spoke to you I don’t know why I just let the tears flow Id never made a vow Such as that before I vowed to love you forever I’ll do just that Now a smile warms me The thought of forever Rings in my mind From above, He shall Watch our lives together. ~*~ Tamma M. Offenstein ~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey good poem i dont know why no one has reply'd to it but hey i love it and it tells your commitment to this guy and i wish my g/f would let me know if she was willing for a commitment or not cuz u can never really tell well hey good poem i like it "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, it does sound like you're very comitted to him, I like the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this was sweet as hell. Good to know some people like the idea of comittment at our age and i'm not the only one.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely statement of your committment to each other Tamma ... nicely expressed! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey tamma! I think its great that everything is going great with justin. Excellent poem! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was sooo sweet, very well stated too. I'm glad that it's all good... well happy writing and stay cool.. ~Carly The grinstone of life can either wear us down or change us, depending on what we're made of. |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very sweet and gentle, great expression of love jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
 I'm so so happy that everything is great in your life.Monica and Justin are with you now, and all of us Your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Thank you all for replying, and as i go thru and re-read this, i realised that yea, even tho it took alot of breakups, but ive found a good guy...i just hope we both follow thru with our vows If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
It's incredibly sweet. All I can say is I really really hope this works out well for the both of you! Good luck, I hope you've found a good one, keep it up. Hasta luego Bel |
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