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Toyed Life |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Toyed Life: Trapped within a drunk, old daze. Pacing the walks of life. I can't help but think this is a phase. Living in a time of strife. Bubble gum city in a world of hell. Meaningless thoughts in void. My time is gone and I have fell. Emotions shattered, and a love just toyed.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
love just toyed. i love how you put it, the prostitution of love in the modern age... San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. This was kickin..."Bubble gum city in a world of hell" now thats great stuff...stay cool javi... ~Carly The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned. ~Isaiah 9:1-2 |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, great expression in this piece, well done. "My time is gone and I have fell. Emotions shattered, and a love just toyed." "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i guess we've all gone through something like this, great piece here, maybe it is a phase jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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