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Lisa...... |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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Lisa is this girl i love, The one who's love fits like a perfect glove, She tells me each and everyday she loves me, I look into her eyes and i can tell its all true, I get very shakey and scared as i begin to fall in love, Everytime i have fell in love ive been left for another guy, reasons unknown or just plain out played, Lisa i think its time i told you, Lisa i am in love with the one and only.....you, I want you to be the one who in a year i am still with, I want you to be the one i will forever know's exists, I love you so much and i never want to leave your side. I want you to know your the one i love and forever will. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww..this poem was so sweet! If you want to tell her these things then do it!! Show her this poem i'm shur she'd love it =o) Great job and i wish you and lisa the best =o) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good job. About giving her the poem like xshugar said...do it.......but i never gave my gf poems. I always thought of it to be too cliché. I never subdue to that sort of romantic cliché BS. So i just kept them mostly to myself hehe....oh well......im stupid like that. bye!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
thanks and ya i already gave this poem to her. and i thank u guys for the reply's since you guys seem to be the only ones replying these days |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I bet she loved getting this because it's such a good poem. It really tells your feelings well! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
This was so sweet, great job!! Happy writing... ~Carly The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned. ~Isaiah 9:1-2 |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
branden- this is so beautiful and heartfelt.  i'm sure Lisa just loved it. enjoyed reading it. *smile*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Yeah, well soon here there will be a new poem about lisa and how i feel about her i dont know if its gonna be good or bad cuz im on an emotional rollercoaster with her. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
branden- well, i hope it turns out to be a happy one...i wish you the best. *smile*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Branden nice poem to your girlfriend. I bet she liked it and I'm sure that your love will last for a while. Your friend ~*~Minna~*~ If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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