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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-10-21 02:33 PM


Hopeless:


This light that calls upon me.
This bliss that seems afar.
Where do I even begin
In avoiding the star?

Running from memories.
It's all that I can do.
Nightmares of hell
Consume all that's true.





"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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Child of the Stars
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1 posted 2000-10-21 02:44 PM


  Hey. Short but oh so deep... wow...uhh...wow...wow...happy writing...

  ~Carly

The people walking in darkness
have seen a great light;
on those living in the land of the shadow of death
a light has dawned.
~Isaiah 9:1-2

Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-10-21 05:52 PM


Running from memories, something I think a lot of people know all too well.  Well written poem here

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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3 posted 2000-10-21 06:09 PM


Wow...short but verrrrry sweeeeet. You pact a whole lotta truth into such a small poem. Great job!!!
anomaly187
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4 posted 2000-10-22 01:36 AM


hey haven't been on in awhile but just my luck you were still here...and a great poem as always...as always writing with emotion and truth..

"It's better to burn out then fade away"

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5 posted 2000-10-22 12:46 PM


i feel like theres a lot of emotion in this peice and i like it but lately ive been wanting to read soemthing funny ya know if ya know of ne poems someone let me know plz!!!

"what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger"

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