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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Hopeless: This light that calls upon me. This bliss that seems afar. Where do I even begin In avoiding the star? Running from memories. It's all that I can do. Nightmares of hell Consume all that's true.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Short but oh so deep... wow...uhh...wow...wow...happy writing... ~Carly The people walking in darkness have seen a great light; on those living in the land of the shadow of death a light has dawned. ~Isaiah 9:1-2 |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Running from memories, something I think a lot of people know all too well. Well written poem here  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow...short but verrrrry sweeeeet. You pact a whole lotta truth into such a small poem. Great job!!! |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey haven't been on in awhile but just my luck you were still here...and a great poem as always...as always writing with emotion and truth.. "It's better to burn out then fade away" |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
i feel like theres a lot of emotion in this peice and i like it but lately ive been wanting to read soemthing funny ya know if ya know of ne poems someone let me know plz!!! "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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