Teen Poetry #3 |
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Spider's Kiss |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico ![]() |
Spider's Kiss: A spider's web shattered. Two fates meet at the center. Blushing brilliance flares. A heart to fully enter. Nine lives gone forever. Eternal consequences lost. Pacing a dead end road. Finger tips of frost. Lost ashes gained back. The thought of completion. A puzzle reaches its whole Afraid of deletion. Moving along the road of future, And on with our fruitful ways. The spider web is shattered. A kiss to end our days. ![]() "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
great writting. nine lives lost forever. youre a cat now? sorry bout that. great writting, i love this cycle. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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peanogrl83 Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 202 |
Vreni |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, this is good ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Im glad you like it San......lake thanks....and Vreni.....it means a LOT to me when you say you LOVE my poem because i love your work. So thanks for liking and you can print anything out... ![]() "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Terryloveiris_85 Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 61The middle of nowhere |
This rocks! ~IRIS |
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