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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-10-20 04:33 PM


Spider's Kiss:


A spider's web shattered.
Two fates meet at the center.
Blushing brilliance flares.
A heart to fully enter.

Nine lives gone forever.
Eternal consequences lost.
Pacing a dead end road.
Finger tips of frost.

Lost ashes gained back.
The thought of completion.
A puzzle reaches its whole
Afraid of deletion.

Moving along the road of future,
And on with our fruitful ways.
The spider web is shattered.
A kiss to end our days.





"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

© Copyright 2000 Pepe de la Muerte - All Rights Reserved
Morouxshi San
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since 2000-10-11
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1 posted 2000-10-20 04:46 PM


great writting.

nine lives lost forever.
youre a cat now?

sorry bout that.
great writting, i love this cycle.


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

peanogrl83
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since 1999-12-04
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2 posted 2000-10-20 05:38 PM


I LOVE this Dopey! This is awesome!!! Can I print this out? Please? First stanza begins an awesome piece, the last ends it perfectly. Ahhh, I LOVE IT!!

Vreni

Lakewalker
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3 posted 2000-10-20 05:40 PM


Yeah, this is good   

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-10-20 06:00 PM


Im glad you like it San......lake thanks....and Vreni.....it means a LOT to me when you say you LOVE my poem because i love your work. So thanks for liking and you can print anything out...



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Terryloveiris_85
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5 posted 2001-05-01 08:52 PM


This rocks!
~IRIS

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