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Love poem anyone? |
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HaVoK Junior Member
since 2000-09-06
Posts 31DETROIT, MI |
I got MAD problems... It seems I keep falling for these girls... but I don't WANT to.. I want to have fun and mess around... not a serious relationship... I'm too young for this... "Again" Again it has happened I've fallen for a girl Who means to me the world Who is my flawless pearl Again my heart wanders And starts love a new My head jumps ahead And I'm lost for a few Again my mind is clouded With thoughts of my Boo For my heart has fallen Deeply in love with you _.~'"'~._HaVoK_.~'"'~._ It's better to burn-out Than fade away....... |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Maybe what you really want is someone who you can be with...you might think that you just want to fool around but everything happens for a reason. Why dont you try sticking with one of these girls that you fall for..you never know what could happen =o) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well what are you doing that for?  Nice poem, I would have to agree with sugarhigh on this one. Of course whenever I say I agree, someone else comes along and disagrees and then I feel like I shouldn't have agreed because I agree with the second person, but anyway, I agree. Maybe your heart is saying you want something real and only your mind wants to play games. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was very well written!! Yeah, and ditto to what those two said...heh...happy writing and good luck with life and the such. ~Carly I'm nobody, who are you? Are you nobody too? Then theres a pair of us-dont tell! They'd banish us, you know... |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I agree with you, in a way. I, also, don't want to fall for anyone (too late, *misses Stef*), but, that's not becuase I don't want a real relationship, I do, I'm just afraid that I'll be hurt, but, yeah, that's just me. Anyway, great poem. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I also agree. Bouncing around from one girl to the next isn't that great. If it is a physical thing, try to settle down with someone because you get all those perks plus more. Keoni |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
OK....for starters i completely and utterly disagree with you on your perception of love. What you are feeling couldn't possibly be LOVE. Love doesn't hop from one girl to another....hop hop hop hop hop hop hop. You're a teenager like me.......either you are mature and fall in love with ONE girl and so on.....or your a teenager and just chill and expirament like the rest. BEcause face it, this is the age of expiramentaion. Not necessarily sex and so on, but relationship wise. Finding out the differences between infatuation, obsession, and love is something to learn with experience. So is the difference between love and lust. So what i am saying is.....don't worry havok.....you're a kid like me.....and hopping from one girl to another doesn't mean you love them......it just means your normal.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dopey said it all so perfect...I mean if you were in love you wouldnt want to jump from girl to girl... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
What Dopey says is true, you probably didn't love these girls that you had before, but that doesn't mean that you don't love this girl that you're writing about. You're NEVER too young for love, my friend. Some people live their whole lives and never fall in love. If you find true love at this age, consider yourself lucky. A "serious" relationship isn't as bad as some make it out to be! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I do agree with Dopey too.You must care a lot about these girls, but don't mistake that as being in love. I agree with LoveBug too about you being lucky is you find one so soon. You must be a very caring person deep inside and this is getting you confused outside. Great poem though....keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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