Teen Poetry #3 |
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I'm Back (For anyone that cares) |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV ![]() |
He said he loved me, But I said I didn’t care, And now my tears are falling. That’s the last thing I meant, I care with all that I am, And I love him too. He’s the only reason, That I’m still here, He’s keeping me alive. I almost broke it off, But I just couldn’t, Bring myself to do that. If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey Tamma! I'm so glad that you've finally come back!!!! I know exactly what its like to have one person that your living for and only for. If you love him, TELL HIM! Everyone deserves to hear the good things you have to say about them no matter what weight your feelings carry. Great poem! WELCOME BACK!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome Back Tamma! ![]() Great to see you posting. I hope all works out for you ... take your time, and do what's right for you! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
WELCOME BACK TAMMA....Eneh weh i hope things work out good ok!?!?! OK! ![]() "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey Tamma!! Care?? Of course we care!! I know you probably have NO idea who I am but I've read your stuff...I'm so sorry I didn't reply. Welcome back, and a wonderful piece you have here... ~Carly "I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You family in Passions will always welcome you back with open arms. This might be the shortest poem of yours that I've read, But overall still a marvelous piece. keep writing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Welcome Home ![]() It's been raining since you left me. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Hey!! Welcome back!!!! Great poem, I liked it alot! Nice job, keep writing!! Much luv, Priscilla ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well of course we care, Welcome back ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Tamma, Remember me? I'm glad you are back! I've missed you here in the forums, replying to my posts...you got alot of catching up to do, girl...get at it! ![]() ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
SCG: how could i forget you? your the one here that encouraged me the most thank you for that ![]() anyways,i wrote this a week ago today, and things are doing so much better now ![]() ![]() If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
I'm glad that your back as well i also have been gone for some time now. but it's was great to come back and read a piece that is great and tells the heart of the writer. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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