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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-10-18 04:54 PM


He said he loved me,
But I said I didn’t care,
And now my tears are falling.

That’s the last thing I meant,
I care with all that I am,
And I love him too.

He’s the only reason,
That I’m still here,
He’s keeping me alive.

I almost broke it off,
But I just couldn’t,
Bring myself to do that.



If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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1 posted 2000-10-18 05:27 PM


Hey Tamma! I'm so glad that you've finally come back!!!! I know exactly what its like to have one person that your living for and only for. If you love him, TELL HIM! Everyone deserves to hear the good things you have to say about them no matter what weight your feelings carry. Great poem! WELCOME BACK!!
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-10-18 07:03 PM


Welcome Back Tamma!  

Great to see you posting. I hope all
works out for you ... take your time,
and do what's right for you!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2000-10-18 07:07 PM


WELCOME BACK TAMMA....Eneh weh i hope things work out good ok!?!?! OK!




"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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4 posted 2000-10-18 07:29 PM



  Hey Tamma!! Care?? Of course we care!! I know you probably have NO idea who I am but I've read your stuff...I'm so sorry I didn't reply. Welcome back, and a wonderful piece you have here...

   ~Carly

"I see," said the blind man to his deaf wife reading the newspaper.

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5 posted 2000-10-18 08:57 PM


You family in Passions will always welcome you back with open arms.

This might be the shortest poem of yours that I've read, But overall still a marvelous piece. keep writing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Caz
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6 posted 2000-10-18 09:41 PM


Welcome Home  

It's been raining since you left me.

sweetstuff101
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7 posted 2000-10-19 12:43 PM


Hey!!
Welcome back!!!!
Great poem, I liked it alot! Nice job, keep writing!!

Much luv,
Priscilla


~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~



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8 posted 2000-10-19 04:03 PM


Well of course we care, Welcome back   This sounds like a tough spot you put yourself in.  If you love him tell him.  I hope everything works out how you want!  ...oh, and nice poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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9 posted 2000-10-20 12:24 PM


Tamma,

Remember me? I'm glad you are back! I've missed you here in the forums, replying to my posts...you got alot of catching up to do, girl...get at it!   J/K....but it is nice to see you around again...welcome home!!! Great poem too!

~*~SCG~*~

Tamma
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10 posted 2000-10-20 03:37 PM


SCG: how could i forget you? your the one here that encouraged me the most thank you for that   thanx for the welcome back everyone!!!!

anyways,i wrote this a week ago today, and things are doing so much better now   hes a great guy, and one of these days, ill get him to come here   < !signature-->

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.




[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 10-20-2000).]

Jeremiah Johnson
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11 posted 2000-10-20 09:58 PM


I'm glad that your back as well i also have been gone for some time now. but it's was great to come back and read a piece that is great and tells the heart of the writer.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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