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1st Kiss |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia 
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That 1st kiss that special night < !signature-->Was the start of something great Bringing two souls together Uniting them into one As his lips brushed up to mine And he held me so safe in his arms This unbelievable feeling came over me Like nothing I’d ever felt before I knew from that moment That very first kiss That he was the one He was my soulmate I remember it so clearly Where we were, what we wore Looking deep into my eyes for so long Saying everything, not in words, but in look That dark, cold night Standing together in our own warm embrace As I looked up at him As he leant down towards me Our lips met That one electrified moment I will never forget connected from then, till eternity * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* [This message has been edited by luvnkris (edited 10-18-2000).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
The 1st kiss is always the most amazing thing in the world (as long as its with the right person)...your whole body feels it and it takes your breath away. I'm glad that your 1st kiss between you and your guy brought you 2 so close together and hopefully will stay that way. Great poem =o) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, way to get your feelings out with this poem, it's really well done  I just love the senses you expressed here!"As his lips brushed up to mine And he held me so safe in his arms This unbelievable feeling came over me Like nothing I’d ever felt before" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Great poem!! You really describe it very well...keep it up Bel |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I like this poem. It is really heartfelt and passionate. The first kiss is the greatest, although mine didn't have the exact same effect,I wish. Great poem and good luck Keoni |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job on expressing that 1st kiss. I remember mine....yep yep!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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