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Teen Poetry #3

Dreams

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-10-16 01:51 PM

Dreams:

The dreams I dream
Simply mean
That dreams are dreams
Of platonic means.

A flyby me.
Bubonic plague.
Flaming seas.
Feeling vague.

So still I dream
A dream of dreams.
Nightmare lust.
Showered dust.

Sun of night.
Oh the light
Wispers fear
Into my ear.

The last of dreams.
Dream of dreams.
Forever in mind,
Enclosed and confined.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-10-16 03:29 PM

An interesting look at dreams, I really like the flow of this.

"Sun of night.
Oh the light
Wispers fear
Into my ear."

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2000-10-16 04:00 PM

Javier*~
Nice one

interesting good work
~*justine*~

peanogrl83
Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 202

3 posted 2000-10-16 05:22 PM

Mmmmm. I like it - goes down smoothly, nice aftertaste. :.) Keep up the good work!

Vreni

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