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For my 999th post......
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For my 999th post...... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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I need to thank you all. You are all very talented writers and I'd like to take this chance to thank you for sharing your work. Your poems can really mold how my day goes. If I'm in a bad mood one of them might make me feel a lot better, or if I'm in a good mood you can make me feel horrible, but it's all good  So everyone, please continue to write and post here, you work is appreciated  Now, lets see, a poem...Up, down all around the ball goes to and fro, it spins and twirls and flys in swirls then falls back to the ground. Uh....yeah, well, it's a poem, isn't it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
*thinks for a bit and say's* Yes I do believe I see this ball! And I do believe it tis a poem "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well this was a poem and your little passage before the poem was much appreciated, I feel the same way as you. The poem itself was quite nice lakewalker. Good job!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
What an original poem Lakewalker...  It was different but I liked it!!!You are moving up...Keep posting my friend!!!~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thank you for the repies! The poem was just added on so my post wouldn't get locked up, I'm glad you like it. I remember now the one other thing that I had wanted to say.......... Visit the Teen Explorer forum!It seems like not enough people go there. But anyway, thanks again < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
dude, your the best at giving comments and advice, only person to applaud is yourself, always giving a good word of praise, always the first to reply to a poem and make someone feel special, neat little poem, now to read number 1000! jeremy r< !signature--> "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ [This message has been edited by jeremydraul (edited 10-16-2000).] |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
To your 999th!! congrats on the big 1-0-0-0!! YOu are talented LakeWalker, and your little poem was interesting! haha created beautiful imagery. And now...on to 2000! right? Best of luck my friend, and the only person who needs praise here is you, you've done an excellent job at giving advice, understanding, and most of all...obviously replying a good number! so, THANK YOU! ~*~Jessica~*~ *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Congratulations Lakewalker I can't believe you're only on your 999th cause I see your reply in every poem i go read. You're everywhere. Everyone must use you as one of their examples of being a good member of Passions I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Now come on, quit thanking me when I'm trying to thank you The reason I keep reading and posting here is because of all of your awesome poems, so keep writing them!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I was hoping more people would see this one, cause I appreciate everyone's work and i want everyone to reply. So this is just a bump "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
It's NOT a poem!  Hah, just kiddin'. It's a poem. And it's neat... good job. hehe...~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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