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Dopey Dope
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0 posted 2000-10-15 08:09 PM


The Dark Elite:


Originally I was nothing but dead.
All alone, nowhere to tread.
Seeing like a blind man could never see.
Running from shear eternity.

Light bade me out of my hole.
The darkness that surely stole.
I am here, yet still can't meet
The dark of dark, the dark elite.




"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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Morouxshi San
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since 2000-10-11
Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2000-10-15 09:46 PM


Light tearing trough
like the intruder it is
destroying my lair
with its boring glare.

nice, some explicit feelings in this 6th cycle.


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

IsGona
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since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

2 posted 2000-10-15 10:39 PM


this is very cool.  It paints a good picture and expresses your thaughts well

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~
"I am, who I am
and what you think,
I don't give a damn"
Chilli Peppers


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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3 posted 2000-10-16 12:26 PM


Another great one Dopey, so far I'm liking the 6th round.    

"Seeing like a blind man could never see.
Running from shear eternity."

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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